Sunday, 18 September 2011

Assessment 16th September

Ryan,
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You have completed the majority of the posts set for Summer Work. Overall the summer work has been completed to a good standard. I see you have made a start on the genre work and this is looking good. You will need to have all of this section complete for next lesson.I know you have done a great lip sync task and I am looking forward to seeing it in class when we have time!
EBI
You still need to have a post discussing the general conventions of a music video.
You still could use more examples of detailed media language to reach your target grade.
Your work on In The Sun is still incomplete.
In July you received a Stage 0/1. This has now escalated. This is disappointing. You must complete this section. JIN- C'mon Ryan - You can do better!

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